Grade 8: Story

Make sure that your story is anchored in time and space.

Give details that describe the location. Include sensory details.

The street bustled with commuters. When a traffic light changed, cars and taxis rushed forward, with horns honking. The scents of morning coffee, car exhaust, and summer air mingled as business people walked briskly to their offices.

Give details that show the time period.

Olivia hurried down the cobblestone street, hoping she hadn't missed the stagecoach.

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