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Grade 7: Persuasive Essay

Improve your introduction by using one of these ideas. Make sure to state your goal.

Describe a scene.

Three students argue about last night's football game. Someone drums on the table while listening to headphones. Kids from the drama club chat and snicker in a corner. How can anyone study in such a noisy library?

Ask a question.

Have you tried to study quietly in our library? Are you tired of the noise? We need new rules about working and talking there.

Tell an anecdote.

At my friend Alana's school library, silent areas and rules for quiet talking make it easy to study alone or work in small groups. Our school needs rules like these.

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